Friday 16 May 2014

Obituary

Leslie Burk is the fastest runner in the 5th grade who has a rich family.
She enjoyed running because she liked it and she helped people out.
She's helpful funny and gives courage she cared for other people and she's confident.
If it hadn't been for Leslie Janise  would still be the school bully.
Then Leslie and jess wanted to take revenge and sent her a embarrassing letter when she read it she felt embarrassed in front of her class mates.
Then Leslie and Jess saw her crying in the corner and cheered her up and she wouldn't bully anyone.
Leslie will be remembered for caring and helping people.




Reflection
I was learning to
write an obituary about 
what happened in
the story and the main 
characters
I found this learning hard because i was confused witch  was para 1 and para 2
My next step is to pay more itention